My five senses in lockdown.
I can hear the birds chirping
In the trees.
I can taste my Mum’s delicious baking!
I can see people walking on the streets.
I can smell the apple crumble crispening in
the oven.
the oven.
I can feel the bed sheets tucked over
my head
my head
Hi Jazmin. What a lovely poem. I really like your word choices, such as crispening. I wonder if you coud add other adverbs and adjectives to each line? Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Jazmin, I enjoyed reading your poem. I heard plenty of birds chirping in my trees too during the lockdown. I walked in the garden, on some sunny days, and heard the buzz of a large Queen Bombus bumblebee. I wonder if you could illustrate your poem and put this on your blog too. Elizabeth K
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